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Story #20: Bridge

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This was written by shanusmagnus. Posted on Wednesday, December 2, 2009, at 8:45 pm. Filed under cat-blog, writing. Bookmark the permalink. Follow comments here with the RSS feed. Post a comment or leave a trackback.
  • leafmuncher
    Liked: I really liked this one. The tone, the rhythm, the dialog, all really great. I think my favorite part was his relationship with the girl and the whole Wisconsin thing. Really nice done. I even read it again to Anna out loud and it confirmed the great flow.

    Disliked: If I had to pick on something, maybe the whole digression about his job and the merger was a bit flow-breaking.
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