Comments on: Story #18: Rubik http://www.longstraighthighway.com/2009/11/29/story-18-rubik/ amusements for gentlemen and scholars Thu, 19 Jan 2012 19:59:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: leafmuncher http://www.longstraighthighway.com/2009/11/29/story-18-rubik/comment-page-1/#comment-2404 leafmuncher Mon, 30 Nov 2009 15:11:51 +0000 http://www.longstraighthighway.com/?p=1516#comment-2404 I quite liked this one. I read it half way through and then had to start over once I figured out what was going on.<br><br>Liked: i liked how the primary device isn't introduced at the beginning (gods, teleportation). The divine dialog is really nice, spunky and funny. <br><br>Disliked: I found the deer vignette a bit confusing, like where they were. I didn't get the "flyface" thing. The final vignette wasn't as "crisp" as the other ones. I quite liked this one. I read it half way through and then had to start over once I figured out what was going on.

Liked: i liked how the primary device isn't introduced at the beginning (gods, teleportation). The divine dialog is really nice, spunky and funny.

Disliked: I found the deer vignette a bit confusing, like where they were. I didn't get the “flyface” thing. The final vignette wasn't as “crisp” as the other ones.

]]> By: leafmuncher http://www.longstraighthighway.com/2009/11/29/story-18-rubik/comment-page-1/#comment-2074 leafmuncher Mon, 30 Nov 2009 07:11:51 +0000 http://www.longstraighthighway.com/?p=1516#comment-2074 I quite liked this one. I read it half way through and then had to start over once I figured out what was going on.<br><br>Liked: i liked how the primary device isn't introduced at the beginning (gods, teleportation). The divine dialog is really nice, spunky and funny. <br><br>Disliked: I found the deer vignette a bit confusing, like where they were. I didn't get the "flyface" thing. The final vignette wasn't as "crisp" as the other ones. I quite liked this one. I read it half way through and then had to start over once I figured out what was going on.

Liked: i liked how the primary device isn't introduced at the beginning (gods, teleportation). The divine dialog is really nice, spunky and funny.

Disliked: I found the deer vignette a bit confusing, like where they were. I didn't get the “flyface” thing. The final vignette wasn't as “crisp” as the other ones.

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