Long Straight Highway (redux)

I quite liked this one. I read it half way through and then had to start over once I figured out what was going on.

Liked: i liked how the primary device isn't introduced at the beginning (gods, teleportation). The divine dialog is really nice, spunky and funny.

Disliked: I found the deer vignette a bit confusing, like where they were. I didn't get the "flyface" thing. The final vignette wasn't as "crisp" as the other ones.