Skip to content

Story #17: An Intervention for Party Bob

kljkf

This was written by shanusmagnus. Posted on Saturday, November 28, 2009, at 9:08 pm. Filed under cat-blog, writing. Bookmark the permalink. Follow comments here with the RSS feed. Post a comment or leave a trackback.
  • janie
    Well at least I'm persistent...here are some comments, hopefully nominally coherent.

    liked: the sparse detail was visually effective for me. This was notable I think, becasuse there was such little emphasis on the visual details that poofy chair and unshaved hair really mattered.

    disliked: it felt like it meandered into several different ideas without staying with any of them
  • leafmuncher
    Ok, I didn't really get this one.

    Liked: the last paragraph.

    Disliked: ifelt like the whole thing was sort of an inside joke that I wasn't privy to.
blog comments powered by Disqus