Comments on: Story #13: The Chinese Hate Us http://www.longstraighthighway.com/2009/11/24/story-13-the-chinese-hate-us/ amusements for gentlemen and scholars Thu, 19 Jan 2012 19:59:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: houlios http://www.longstraighthighway.com/2009/11/24/story-13-the-chinese-hate-us/comment-page-1/#comment-2392 houlios Wed, 02 Dec 2009 09:54:24 +0000 http://www.longstraighthighway.com/?p=1495#comment-2392 Lots of really funny parts, arguing about shit in the ways that I recognize always makes me giddy. I also liked the ending this time, I felt I got some payoff.<br><br>Disliked - I thought Carl could've been fleshed out a bit more or he could've just been left out. As it was, he didn't add much, but I am nitpicking mostly just to come up with something I disliked about this story. It was really funny. Lots of really funny parts, arguing about shit in the ways that I recognize always makes me giddy. I also liked the ending this time, I felt I got some payoff.

Disliked – I thought Carl could've been fleshed out a bit more or he could've just been left out. As it was, he didn't add much, but I am nitpicking mostly just to come up with something I disliked about this story. It was really funny.

]]> By: houlios http://www.longstraighthighway.com/2009/11/24/story-13-the-chinese-hate-us/comment-page-1/#comment-2080 houlios Wed, 02 Dec 2009 01:54:24 +0000 http://www.longstraighthighway.com/?p=1495#comment-2080 Lots of really funny parts, arguing about shit in the ways that I recognize always makes me giddy. I also liked the ending this time, I felt I got some payoff.<br><br>Disliked - I thought Carl could've been fleshed out a bit more or he could've just been left out. As it was, he didn't add much, but I am nitpicking mostly just to come up with something I disliked about this story. It was really funny. Lots of really funny parts, arguing about shit in the ways that I recognize always makes me giddy. I also liked the ending this time, I felt I got some payoff.

Disliked – I thought Carl could've been fleshed out a bit more or he could've just been left out. As it was, he didn't add much, but I am nitpicking mostly just to come up with something I disliked about this story. It was really funny.

]]> By: leafmuncher http://www.longstraighthighway.com/2009/11/24/story-13-the-chinese-hate-us/comment-page-1/#comment-2064 leafmuncher Thu, 26 Nov 2009 08:46:42 +0000 http://www.longstraighthighway.com/?p=1495#comment-2064 Highly enjoyable.<br><br>Liked: funny, flowed well, good ending. You painted a really nice picture of the protagonist with just the right brush strokes.<br>Disliked: The "You wonder about all those boring old guys" part could be taken out completely, I think, it broke my flow and confused me a bit. Highly enjoyable.

Liked: funny, flowed well, good ending. You painted a really nice picture of the protagonist with just the right brush strokes.
Disliked: The “You wonder about all those boring old guys” part could be taken out completely, I think, it broke my flow and confused me a bit.

]]> By: Eden http://www.longstraighthighway.com/2009/11/24/story-13-the-chinese-hate-us/comment-page-1/#comment-2063 Eden Wed, 25 Nov 2009 02:58:33 +0000 http://www.longstraighthighway.com/?p=1495#comment-2063 I don't think there's any shame in working on something that will take longer. As long as you're working, it counts in my book. Or maybe I'm just trying to catch up to you, dammit. I don't think there's any shame in working on something that will take longer. As long as you're working, it counts in my book. Or maybe I'm just trying to catch up to you, dammit.

]]> By: leafmuncher http://www.longstraighthighway.com/2009/11/24/story-13-the-chinese-hate-us/comment-page-1/#comment-2062 leafmuncher Wed, 25 Nov 2009 02:31:23 +0000 http://www.longstraighthighway.com/?p=1495#comment-2062 Is there any way I can request a "do over"? My fucking RSS reader puts me one day behind with my comments, and my timezone doesn't help either. Is there any way I can request a “do over”? My fucking RSS reader puts me one day behind with my comments, and my timezone doesn't help either.

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