Comments on: Story #12: Breaking Camp http://www.longstraighthighway.com/2009/11/23/story-12-breaking-camp/ amusements for gentlemen and scholars Thu, 19 Jan 2012 19:59:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: houlios http://www.longstraighthighway.com/2009/11/23/story-12-breaking-camp/comment-page-1/#comment-2366 houlios Wed, 02 Dec 2009 09:40:31 +0000 http://www.longstraighthighway.com/?p=1493#comment-2366 I loved the bit about the coffee and the "final insult." Made me laugh out loud.<br><br>Disliked the ending, again. I am so predictable. I loved the bit about the coffee and the “final insult.” Made me laugh out loud.

Disliked the ending, again. I am so predictable.

]]> By: houlios http://www.longstraighthighway.com/2009/11/23/story-12-breaking-camp/comment-page-1/#comment-2082 houlios Wed, 02 Dec 2009 01:40:31 +0000 http://www.longstraighthighway.com/?p=1493#comment-2082 I loved the bit about the coffee and the "final insult." Made me laugh out loud.<br><br>Disliked the ending, again. I am so predictable. I loved the bit about the coffee and the “final insult.” Made me laugh out loud.

Disliked the ending, again. I am so predictable.

]]> By: leafmuncher http://www.longstraighthighway.com/2009/11/23/story-12-breaking-camp/comment-page-1/#comment-2061 leafmuncher Wed, 25 Nov 2009 02:30:30 +0000 http://www.longstraighthighway.com/?p=1493#comment-2061 Liked: "Although he was annoyed that you could actually die..." made me laugh. The whole story made me tense, and I felt like it was leading up to some sort of climax that would explain the dead guy, relate him to the rest of the story.<br><br>Disliked: Felt a bit let down by the ending, as all my tension build-up seemed for naught, but perhaps it was an intentional fake. Liked: “Although he was annoyed that you could actually die…” made me laugh. The whole story made me tense, and I felt like it was leading up to some sort of climax that would explain the dead guy, relate him to the rest of the story.

Disliked: Felt a bit let down by the ending, as all my tension build-up seemed for naught, but perhaps it was an intentional fake.

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