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Story #12: Breaking Camp

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This was written by shanusmagnus. Posted on Monday, November 23, 2009, at 7:27 pm. Filed under cat-blog, writing. Bookmark the permalink. Follow comments here with the RSS feed. Post a comment or leave a trackback.
  • houlios
    I loved the bit about the coffee and the "final insult." Made me laugh out loud.

    Disliked the ending, again. I am so predictable.
  • leafmuncher
    Liked: "Although he was annoyed that you could actually die..." made me laugh. The whole story made me tense, and I felt like it was leading up to some sort of climax that would explain the dead guy, relate him to the rest of the story.

    Disliked: Felt a bit let down by the ending, as all my tension build-up seemed for naught, but perhaps it was an intentional fake.
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