Long Straight Highway (redux)

I liked this one a lot too. But generally I like your genre stories a lot.

I liked pretty much everything about it: The dialogue, the dystopian setting, the characterization of Saunders, the violence.

I didn't like the ending though, as usual, I want more explanation and/or payoff, a lot of times the endings are too abrupt IMO.

P.S. Where the *fuck* are the other readers of this blog? I know you're out there, and you should be reading these stories, they are really a highlight of my otherwise extremely busy and often frustrating days.

I liked this one a lot.

Liked: The great dry humor throughout, lots of good one-liners before the "#" separators.
Disliked: I thought the dialog about King and I after "That's a stereotype" didn't really make much sense, or add much.