Long Straight Highway (redux)

I liked that it made me sad, but sad in a good way, if you get my drift.

I agree with Leafmuncher, the dudes needed more differentiation.

I liked the title and final sentence, and the general theme of complex global processes, sort of like (but not) the environmental butterfly that flaps its wings.

I didn't like the execution. Probably because I'm retarded, I couldn't keep straight who was the rich guy and who was the poor guy, and had to keep flipping back to the beginning.