Comments on: Story #9: Nothing Beyond Repair http://www.longstraighthighway.com/2009/11/20/story-9-nothing-beyond-repair/ amusements for gentlemen and scholars Thu, 19 Jan 2012 19:59:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: houlios http://www.longstraighthighway.com/2009/11/20/story-9-nothing-beyond-repair/comment-page-1/#comment-2395 houlios Fri, 27 Nov 2009 08:31:45 +0000 http://www.longstraighthighway.com/2009/11/20/story-9-nothing-beyond-repair/#comment-2395 Liked: You built a real feeling of anticipation, almost dread, with just wtf Jameson was up to, I couldn't wait to get to the end and find out.<br><br>Disliked: The frisbee playing. Liked: You built a real feeling of anticipation, almost dread, with just wtf Jameson was up to, I couldn't wait to get to the end and find out.

Disliked: The frisbee playing.

]]> By: houlios http://www.longstraighthighway.com/2009/11/20/story-9-nothing-beyond-repair/comment-page-1/#comment-2067 houlios Fri, 27 Nov 2009 00:31:45 +0000 http://www.longstraighthighway.com/2009/11/20/story-9-nothing-beyond-repair/#comment-2067 Liked: You built a real feeling of anticipation, almost dread, with just wtf Jameson was up to, I couldn't wait to get to the end and find out.<br><br>Disliked: The frisbee playing. Liked: You built a real feeling of anticipation, almost dread, with just wtf Jameson was up to, I couldn't wait to get to the end and find out.

Disliked: The frisbee playing.

]]> By: leafmuncher http://www.longstraighthighway.com/2009/11/20/story-9-nothing-beyond-repair/comment-page-1/#comment-2056 leafmuncher Sat, 21 Nov 2009 06:03:17 +0000 http://www.longstraighthighway.com/2009/11/20/story-9-nothing-beyond-repair/#comment-2056 Liked: the way you brought a lot of the characters' history in with the conversation over whiskey. The way you brought little bits and pieces of your own life into the story. The part where J picks the lock brought chills to my spine.<br><br>Disliked: for some reason the last few paragraphs didn't work for me. I thought the story ended just a tad too abruptly. Liked: the way you brought a lot of the characters' history in with the conversation over whiskey. The way you brought little bits and pieces of your own life into the story. The part where J picks the lock brought chills to my spine.

Disliked: for some reason the last few paragraphs didn't work for me. I thought the story ended just a tad too abruptly.

]]> By: Pamela http://www.longstraighthighway.com/2009/11/20/story-9-nothing-beyond-repair/comment-page-1/#comment-2055 Pamela Fri, 20 Nov 2009 22:57:21 +0000 http://www.longstraighthighway.com/2009/11/20/story-9-nothing-beyond-repair/#comment-2055 Dear, I don't know how you are doing it. I wrote a story two days in a row and I can't bear to look at my computer right now. I'm doing my daily minimum of 500 words and then curling up in front of the TV with my remote control. Dear, I don't know how you are doing it. I wrote a story two days in a row and I can't bear to look at my computer right now. I'm doing my daily minimum of 500 words and then curling up in front of the TV with my remote control.

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