Comments on: CW0809 Writing Contest, or, Where I’ve Been http://www.longstraighthighway.com/2009/11/12/cw0809-writing-contest-or-where-ive-been/ amusements for gentlemen and scholars Thu, 19 Jan 2012 19:59:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: MonicaHov http://www.longstraighthighway.com/2009/11/12/cw0809-writing-contest-or-where-ive-been/comment-page-1/#comment-2543 MonicaHov Sun, 29 Nov 2009 22:50:40 +0000 http://www.longstraighthighway.com/?p=1439#comment-2543 I agree with both of Houle's comments. Fun story but the ending felt like you didn't have time to finish. I agree with both of Houle's comments. Fun story but the ending felt like you didn't have time to finish.

]]> By: MonicaHov http://www.longstraighthighway.com/2009/11/12/cw0809-writing-contest-or-where-ive-been/comment-page-1/#comment-2075 MonicaHov Sun, 29 Nov 2009 14:50:40 +0000 http://www.longstraighthighway.com/?p=1439#comment-2075 I agree with both of Houle's comments. Fun story but the ending felt like you didn't have time to finish. I agree with both of Houle's comments. Fun story but the ending felt like you didn't have time to finish.

]]> By: houlios http://www.longstraighthighway.com/2009/11/12/cw0809-writing-contest-or-where-ive-been/comment-page-1/#comment-2047 houlios Sun, 15 Nov 2009 03:32:25 +0000 http://www.longstraighthighway.com/?p=1439#comment-2047 re: Story #1<br><br>I liked the dialog between Brody and Simonsen - it made me LOL a couple of times.<br>I didn't like not knowing wtf was going on at the end when the guys get run off, I know its probably not important but I wanted to know anyway and it bugged me that I didn't. re: Story #1

I liked the dialog between Brody and Simonsen – it made me LOL a couple of times.
I didn't like not knowing wtf was going on at the end when the guys get run off, I know its probably not important but I wanted to know anyway and it bugged me that I didn't.

]]> By: mrfahrenheit http://www.longstraighthighway.com/2009/11/12/cw0809-writing-contest-or-where-ive-been/comment-page-1/#comment-2044 mrfahrenheit Thu, 12 Nov 2009 20:13:51 +0000 http://www.longstraighthighway.com/?p=1439#comment-2044 You're going to be a busy fucker. You know I come here everyday. Now I'll have something to read. You're going to be a busy fucker. You know I come here everyday. Now I'll have something to read.

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